Some time ago, in the midst of the terrible fires that were burning up so much of western North America, My daughter made a comment which was sort of like a haiku, but not quite. When a friend commented on that, she said she was thinking about turning it into a haiku but was just too busy. So I tucked it way thinking that it was too good not to turn into a haiku and I would do it myself someday.
So here’s her original and my interpretation:
Woke up on an apocolyptic sunrise between two fires
ash falls upon us
Apocalypsis
Rising sun between two fires
soft rainfall of ash
Nice imagery. All of which is hers.
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